Woo hoo!¬† I would like to congratulate myself for completing my first draft on my short film screenplay.¬† After scrapping my first idea and going in a completely different direction I’m just happy that I have a story concept on paper.
Now comes the amazingly fun part of revisions.¬† I know without even looking at it that there will be tons of mistakes, and that some of the parts of the story need to be reworked.¬† That being said it’s not a total disaster because¬† I got all the scenes that have been playing in my head on paper. ¬† Now I just need to find the best ways to work them all together and most importantly the best dialogue to make that happen.
Once I revise the script to my liking then I will start to pass it on to friends and family to see what they think.¬† This part I think is especially important because you get unbiased eyes reading it.
If anyone is interested to help me revise feel free to send me an email and once I get it to where I want it to be I’ll send a copy over to you.¬† Also any advice about dialogue, specifically for a kid oriented movie would be a great help!