Woo hoo!  I would like to congratulate myself for completing my first draft on my short film screenplay.  After scrapping my first idea and going in a completely different direction I’m just happy that I have a story concept on paper.

Now comes the amazingly fun part of revisions.  I know without even looking at it that there will be tons of mistakes, and that some of the parts of the story need to be reworked.  That being said it’s not a total disaster because  I got all the scenes that have been playing in my head on paper.   Now I just need to find the best ways to work them all together and most importantly the best dialogue to make that happen.

Once I revise the script to my liking then I will start to pass it on to friends and family to see what they think.  This part I think is especially important because you get unbiased eyes reading it.

If anyone is interested to help me revise feel free to send me an email and once I get it to where I want it to be I’ll send a copy over to you.  Also any advice about dialogue, specifically for a kid oriented movie would be a great help!